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SS: The Tea Time by futarinokizuna SS: The Tea Time by futarinokizuna
Merry Christmas!
I'm invited to :iconsecret-santa2012: this year ^_^
The drawing is a gift for *naseu featuring her OCs Yin and Yang. Hope she likes it ^_^;

I want to make another pic for this year but maybe I can't make it...oh well, lets see later!

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to start, this picture is beautifully detailed and full of colors it feels very natural in lighting and shading but it also seems a little to dimmed in some places on the light side could be a bit brighter but it still fits the picture nicely either way.

now the back ground it lovely all around and again its quite detailed to the setting but is also a little confusing. i love the dark painting behind yin yin and i understand the symbolism to go with shadow nature but some thing about it seems off and over done using the painting to describe her being dark people often use stuff like this to convey a character in art so even though it fits the picture i think you could have used some thing new thats used less. on the light side i love how you made the rays of light coming through the window their clear and realistic the blend perfectly with every thing else.

last thing is another point of confusion in the back ground why so many flowers? why all of the same type i think you over used those flowers they make it a little off balance as a suggestion you could have used white lilies or harmony ikebana flowers [link] to give off more of a variety.

still the picture as a whole is very lovely and you must have put alot of work into it.

((btw happy holidays))
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DarkAngelNikita Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have been challenged by one of my friends to write a story/back-story for all of the pictures in my People favorites.
"You need to loosen up, Yin!" Yang exclaims, taking a seat in the window.
"Hmp. Easy for you to say." Yin says. "My father would kill me if he found out we went partying a week before the academy finals. He isn't exactly fond of you, you know."
"Ha! I'm just outgoing while he expects girls to be delicate, obedient little things." She takes a sip of her tea. "Why don't you just tell him you're helping me study? As much as he hates me, your father knows we've been best friends since elementary school and knows how upset you'd be if we didn't graduate together. You already know all your material, don't you?"
"Yes, but I don't even have any of the same classes as you."
"Yes, it's obvious by your darker robes and blue undershirt that you're in the more elite classes. That means that helping someone like me with lower classes will be a cinch. You probably learned this material, last year. Besides, you've been studying so much I'm surprised your head hasn't exploded. You need to relax, a little, and have some fun. Please? Do this for yourself."
Yin sighs. "Alright, but we have to study a little before we go and...party."
"Aww!!! Fine!" 

  
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Kelindark Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
I disagree about the critique given. Because the yin and yang element is what makes this work captivating to me. The same flowers used is symbolic, from what I see. Kudos, futarinokizuna, I faved this one because it's one of the best I've seen :)
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Grell3854 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
Ur artworks are ever so amazing
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xxxsleepy Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
complex sekali gambarnya. sekaligus cantik
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creamycreepy Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student
"keren sekali" tak cukup untuk mengkomentarinya hoho :D
klo boleh tau berapa lama nih pengerjaannya?
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Aruvian-Mahomedto Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
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gambarnya kereeen..! *o*
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
makasih yaaa :hug:
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:iconriki-to:
Riki-to Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Saya gak bisa bicara..
Dikau imbaa sekali OAO
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:iconfutarinokizuna:
futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^; ayo berjuang agar lebih imba lagi! /eh
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mielru Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Asli keren sekali!!! Skill painting dan detail semakin meningkat :thumbsup:
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:iconfutarinokizuna:
futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aaa makasih ya kakaa XD :hug:
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:iconmielru:
mielru Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
kwkwkww, macama :glomp:
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depinz Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
waw, cakep sekali mimi :heart: o :heart:
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you ciciii XD ayo ktemuaaan XD
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TheBlackRose88 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Beautiful detail :) The use of light is perfect, makes me feel like I'm standing in the room :)
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:iconfutarinokizuna:
futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much! glad you feel that way ^^
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Mad-Hatter-Heather Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just beautifful im in <3!
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much :D
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Neoconvoy Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student General Artist
That's quite good!

The details, characters and illumination are so well done. Also, having the background divided in light and dark areas for the characters is a nice touch too.

The only thing I found with problems, is the top inner line in the middle lamp.
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much! this is very nice of you ^^ what's the problem though? is it out of perspective?
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Neoconvoy Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Yes, the top line of the lamp, instead of following the spherical shape, is almost straight.
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahh I see.. I thought it's because the perspective, but if it seems off I'll try to think about it for the future. thank you so much! ^^
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Neoconvoy Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
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Song95 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful :3
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much ^^
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aquamarinetiger98 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*S* this is just ...


AMAZING
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! :D
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darkmello Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
tambah sangar Mi! *amazed *_*
keunggulanmu memang di warna dan niat detilinnya, gile bg jendela nya dan bunga2nya dan lukisan d belakang ituu (mana bg china gini banyak ukiran, kamu ngegambarnya niat bgt, eaa)

cm IMO pose yin (yg putih yin?)-nya keliatan sedikit off, susah banget duduk begitu lo, mungkin seharusnya lebih kek begini--->[link]? lebih rileks punggungnya dan kakinya lebih 'berkait' just my 2cent ^^

ga bosen2 yg liat ni *_* request WIP dunk kalo ada :D
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wahhh makasih ci mel >__<" gimana kabarnya, udah sembuh kah?
ahh ya tapi aku moody soal ngedetil kadang jg males haha *kabur* ah soal posenya memang agak off, aku cari referensi gak ketemu2. makasih ya referensinya ^_^"

WIP gak ada...paling adanya di blog aku itu tadinya masih kayak gini -> [link]
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darkmello Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
udah baikan mi, mi barusan aku baca komikmu yg Turnamen Komik Indonesia di blog mu, bagus mi! Enak flow baca nya, warnanya asyik enak di mata, jd enjoy baca, tp tiba2 putus di tengah2...>_> hehe itu gimana nasib Gilbert, desperate bgt -.-'
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahh sukurlah . bisa balik kerja lagi ya? :D wahh makasih banget cc mau baca >///< putus ditengah krn ga tau endingna apa, aku bikinnya maraton sih ^^> jdi endingna tergantung orang masing2 aja wkwk. apakah sad ending atau happy ending :rofl:
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cloudbuster01 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
Sorry for me this pic seems almost perfect! I love it when someone put so much details in his work and the flowers seems to me one the main theme of this pic!
Yeah...Yeah...all the little cretiques about ... this is too much, this is too bright , i dont like her hair, i dont like this costume are meaningless if you dont work on the same lvl like the artist you talking about!
I think the quality of this pic is so high that only 5% from all the deviant artist have reach this workinglvl! -_-
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:iconfutarinokizuna:
futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thank you so much! :hug: however critiques are needed, I realize I am still so unstable regarding the quality. Eventhough it's like that, I'm glad you love this pic :) hopefully it made your day.
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cloudbuster01 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Ahhhhhh...sorry or my late aswer!
Yeah... you are right! :-)
Of cause critiques are needed but how can someone give a good and helpfull critique who didn`t even have one handemade picture on is deviant ACC.
I am usually the calm and nice type of person but such things like that are unbelivable.^^
So sorry it was a little harsh commet....
By the way i really love your work with all this details and efforts! :-)
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no worries, I'm late to reply as well ^^;
yeah normally people will think like "why s/he even care and give critiques when s/he can't even draw?!" well I'm open to anybody as long as it's not trolling :D
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Hellobaby Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
This is a first time I see a SS work is detailed, bg, and of course beautiful like this. This show how amazing of your talent and you have such a wonderful heart.
My admire for you <3
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much! I didn't expect the outcome too, what's in my mind just to make the person I gave the art to will be happy ^^
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Amarvica Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
oh my God I so adore your awesome details sis... termasuk efek bunga blur ini bagus banget jadi terkesan foto dan all hail pencahayaanmu lah ><
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you yaa ^^; glad it come out well.
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lotusbiru Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
waaww.. aku lama ga browsing2 DA, sekalinya kesini colouringmu udah dewaaa *uwwwooo*
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ahaha makasihh.. sbenarnya..lagi hoki aja ini bisa dapet feelnya ^^;
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Lunterna Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Wow! cool!
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! ^_^
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PassingSeasons Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconasdfghplz: Its so detailed! :) Looks wonderful!
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much XD :hug:
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Ahrrhd Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome work!!
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank youu ^^
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miiamidbluNiteStar Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist
beautiful work ^^
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much :heart:
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miiamidbluNiteStar Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist
np ^^
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