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Recollecting The Heart by futarinokizuna Recollecting The Heart by futarinokizuna
Maybe you never know..
Maybe you never care.
This heart of mine is really fragile.
Words that you said it's a joke,
Act that you think it's not important,
they can rip my heart to pieces.
It only takes seconds for you to break my heart.
And it may take years for me to recollect them back.


I'm feauring =Felutiahime's OC, I'm sorry if it's nothing like her ^^;

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The piece is very expressive of the pain of a pure heart shattered and the struggle to put oneself back together. The color choice for the background while light adds a bleakness and how her eyes are shadowed give off the feeling that the character is lost in grief. The lake of tears leaves the impression that she has been suffering for a long time yet with her reaching out for one of the pieces shows she is trying to put herself back together. The blood stands out in vivid contrast to the characters gown easily expressing the gravity of her wound.
It is an emotionally packed piece as much about pain as it is the fight to heal, to be yourself once more. Original in my opinion because of the color choice. It being such a harsh "dark" theme yet the piece is light filled. Overall it left a strong impact.
The execution of the piece is well done however i believe more attention needs to be paid to the hand grasping her chest as well as the heart shaped hole in the characters chest and blood. The hand appears to be much smaller than the other and lacks the detail and sense of depth that the rest of the piece has. The blood on the characters hand and within the wound seem rushed. Personally i believe the heart shaped wound i overkill and takes away from the severity of the situation.
A great piece and well done. Looking forward to more of your work and hope that this will be helpful.
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Resha04 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Cantiknya...... Cantik dan sedih.
Warnanya juga baguuuussss*terharu*
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Makasiii,iya nih bikin gbr depresi hahahaha
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Resha04 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Tp baguuuusssssss =w=
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Giando1611990 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012   Digital Artist
What intense image! You made a really good work
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much !! :D
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Giando1611990 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012   Digital Artist
You're very welcome! :)
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Lavypoo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Artist
so sad and beautiful...
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much :hug:
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Riku-of-Darkness Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I've had this picture in my inbox since you posted it but I cannot think of anything intelligent to say. The image is so profound and emotional, both on its own and when paired with the poem beneath it, that I cannot think of any words that would match its sorrowed beauty.
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futarinokizuna Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks! :hug: you don't have to force yourself, I'm happy you love it :D
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